Breaker of Fate
The Weaver-blessed and the Warrior.
A love so intense, it spans lifetimes.
A demon, a dagger, and a deadly betrayal.
Derica drifts through a satisfactory, if stagnant, existence in the small farming town of Arlan after her mother’s passing—until a night of fire and revelation prompts her to venture into the larger world. Danger, intrigue, and temptation wait for her.
Beings suffering a mysterious soul affliction haunt Derica’s journey. Justus, a gruff, enigmatic mercenary commander, draws her like a flame but he struggles against their attraction. Secrets swirl around the pair as their past and present tangle. He struggles to forgive and forget what lays behind him. Strange illness and shadowy figures keep thrusting them together. They dance on the edge of a dagger—one misstep from falling.
As their pasts are exposed, and danger circles, their hearts are revealed. Fate has far more in store for Derica and the commander than she realizes, and the truth of their relationship could change their world forever.
Type of Edit:
Manuscript Evaluation with Coaching
What the author has to say
“Cianne was a delight to work with. I submitted my second draft manuscript to her for an evaluation. It takes a lot of fortitude to hand someone your finished work when it’s not complete or perfect, so I don’t say this lightly. I already had beta reader feedback before submitting the work for evaluation. Some of Cianne’s feedback was in line with others’ comments and some was fresh insight.
When we sat down for our hour-long review of her evaluation and notes, I felt entirely comfortable rejecting some feedback (which is a big deal for me personally) and discussing how to implement others. I came out of our meeting really excited to make changes and full of ideas for my next draft. Cianne is an amazing asset and cheerleader for writers in this way and I can’t recommend her highly enough.
A book coach really needs to want to be on your team and make your vision for your book come true, and I felt incredibly validated and heard by Cianne. Not only did I get some invaluable insight from her for my next draft, but I also have someone rallying for my success.”
- R.M. Derrick
