Breaker of Fate
A fantasy romance full of fated mates stuck in an endless reincarnation loop, a spreading magical sickness, and chock full of LGBTQ+ and plus size representation.
Type of Edit:
Manuscript Evaluation with Coaching
What the author has to say
“Cianne was a delight to work with. I submitted my second draft manuscript to her for an evaluation. It takes a lot of fortitude to hand someone your finished work when it’s not complete or perfect, so I don’t say this lightly. I already had beta reader feedback before submitting the work for evaluation. Some of Cianne’s feedback was in line with others’ comments and some was fresh insight.
When we sat down for our hour-long review of her evaluation and notes, I felt entirely comfortable rejecting some feedback (which is a big deal for me personally) and discussing how to implement others. I came out of our meeting really excited to make changes and full of ideas for my next draft. Cianne is an amazing asset and cheerleader for writers in this way and I can’t recommend her highly enough.
A book coach really needs to want to be on your team and make your vision for your book come true, and I felt incredibly validated and heard by Cianne. Not only did I get some invaluable insight from her for my next draft, but I also have someone rallying for my success.”
- R.M. Derrick